Exercises 7.19-7.23: Editing for Conciseness (p. 211) Editing for Conciseness (Long Words) [LO-3] Revise the following sentences, using shorter, simpler words: 7-19. Our superannuated content management system has proven to be ineffectual once again. 7-20. It is imperative that the pay increments be terminated before an inordinate deficit is accumulated. 7-21. There was unanimity among the executives that his behavior was cause for a mandatory meeting with the company’s personnel director. 7-22. The impending liquidation of the company’s assets was cause for jubilation among the company’s competitors. 7-23. The expectations of the president for a stock dividend were accentuated by the preponderance of evidence that the company was in good financial condition.